Welcome to Philforum! While I am sure many Members of the community may wish to provide some guidance, advice, and criticism of your paper, the general guidelines posted in Phil. 101 seem to apply, and will indicate the kind of help you may expect:

Outlines or abstracts of your paper may be presented, and questions asked about its organisation and structure. These outlines should reflect some prior thinking and research.
Short passages may be presented if the writer is not satisfied with their wording or structure. DO NOT EXPECT ANYONE TO WRITE YOUR PAPER, OR TO COPYREAD IT FOR YOU.

Reqards,
John